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Why focus your topic?<\/strong><\/span><\/span><\/p>\n"},"subContentId":"bc89bc25-2f8f-41e7-89b5-544dafdc868d","metadata":{"contentType":"Text","license":"U","title":"Untitled Text"}},"alwaysDisplayComments":false,"backgroundOpacity":0,"displayAsButton":false,"buttonSize":"big","goToSlideType":"specified","invisible":false,"solution":""},{"x":82.67223382045928,"y":87.21649484536083,"width":15.44885177453027,"height":10.103092783505156,"action":{"library":"H5P.Image 1.1","params":{"contentName":"Image","file":{"path":"images\/file-5d80eaa264bdb.jpg","mime":"image\/jpeg","copyright":{"license":"U"},"width":260,"height":88},"alt":"Laurier University Logo","decorative":false},"subContentId":"a9281ca7-2d2e-4450-977f-7f8297f8be02","metadata":{"contentType":"Image","license":"U","title":"Laurier University Logo"}},"alwaysDisplayComments":false,"backgroundOpacity":0,"displayAsButton":false,"buttonSize":"big","goToSlideType":"specified","invisible":false,"solution":""},{"x":5.219206680584551,"y":89.69072164948454,"width":16.49269311064718,"height":5.773195876288661,"action":{"library":"H5P.AdvancedText 1.1","params":{"text":"

library.wlu.ca<\/strong><\/span><\/span><\/a><\/p>\n"},"subContentId":"da7bef46-d2f2-4448-9c5d-d06479b92e1f","metadata":{"contentType":"Text","license":"U","title":"Untitled Text"}},"alwaysDisplayComments":false,"backgroundOpacity":0,"displayAsButton":false,"buttonSize":"big","goToSlideType":"specified","invisible":false,"solution":""},{"x":10.893246187363834,"y":47.31182795698924,"width":59.2901878914405,"height":7.835051546391753,"action":{"library":"H5P.AdvancedText 1.1","params":{"text":"

What your instructor expects in your paper<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n"},"subContentId":"ad864e5a-96d4-4879-a5e9-e5e0f12abc65","metadata":{"contentType":"Text","license":"U","title":"Untitled Text"}},"alwaysDisplayComments":false,"backgroundOpacity":0,"displayAsButton":false,"buttonSize":"big","goToSlideType":"specified","invisible":false,"solution":""}]},{"slideBackgroundSelector":{"imageSlideBackground":{"path":"images\/imageSlideBackground-5d80e832eed7f.jpg","mime":"image\/jpeg","copyright":{"license":"U"},"width":1836,"height":908}},"elements":[{"x":6.5359477124183005,"y":15.053763440860214,"width":45.72025052192067,"height":57.31958762886598,"action":{"library":"H5P.AdvancedText 1.1","params":{"text":"

What is your instructor looking for?<\/span><\/strong><\/p>\n\n

In university your instructors are looking for your ability to make and support an argument in your paper. They want to see your thinking and analysis.<\/span><\/p>\n\n

To show this, you need to write about your topic in depth.<\/span><\/p>\n"},"metadata":{"contentType":"Text","license":"U","title":"Untitled Text"},"subContentId":"a2df3251-afa2-4861-9f89-dfe32d10a063"},"alwaysDisplayComments":false,"backgroundOpacity":0,"displayAsButton":false,"buttonSize":"big","goToSlideType":"specified","invisible":false,"solution":""},{"x":54.46623093681917,"y":10.732516129032257,"width":41.72113289760349,"height":66.66666666666666,"action":{"library":"H5P.Image 1.1","params":{"contentName":"Image","file":{"path":"images\/file-6047e185af846.png","mime":"image\/png","copyright":{"license":"U"},"width":717,"height":411,"originalImage":{"path":"images\/file-6047e1318bdfa.png","mime":"image\/png","height":540,"width":720}},"alt":"shallow versus deep","decorative":false},"subContentId":"c86f5cf1-fb26-4ad9-abb0-6bc7a5fa89b4","metadata":{"contentType":"Image","license":"U","title":"Untitled Image"}},"alwaysDisplayComments":false,"backgroundOpacity":0,"displayAsButton":false,"buttonSize":"big","goToSlideType":"specified","invisible":false,"solution":""}]},{"slideBackgroundSelector":{"imageSlideBackground":{"path":"images\/imageSlideBackground-5dbc54df8e0db.jpg","mime":"image\/jpeg","copyright":{"license":"U"},"width":1836,"height":908}},"elements":[{"x":6.261917211328977,"y":8.225806451612904,"width":22.766884531590414,"height":17.204301075268816,"action":{"library":"H5P.AdvancedText 1.1","params":{"text":"

Shallow is not ideal<\/strong><\/span><\/p>\n"},"metadata":{"contentType":"Text","license":"U","title":"Untitled Text"},"subContentId":"81915a4c-5aea-49a3-af66-109d563fd843"},"alwaysDisplayComments":false,"backgroundOpacity":0,"displayAsButton":false,"buttonSize":"big","goToSlideType":"specified","invisible":false,"solution":""},{"x":6.5359477124183005,"y":30.10752688172043,"width":22.766884531590414,"height":59.784946236559136,"action":{"library":"H5P.AdvancedText 1.1","params":{"text":"

Often students want to write about 3 points, like in high school. <\/span><\/p>\n\n

The problem is that 3 may be too many, and resulting in a shallow, superficial analysis of each.<\/span><\/p>\n"},"metadata":{"contentType":"Text","license":"U","title":"Untitled Text"},"subContentId":"6db974b0-6d2e-49f7-ac11-fcc7ff63c159"},"alwaysDisplayComments":false,"backgroundOpacity":0,"displayAsButton":false,"buttonSize":"big","goToSlideType":"specified","invisible":false,"solution":""},{"x":39.21568627450981,"y":12.862903225806452,"width":46.84095860566449,"height":81.72043010752688,"action":{"library":"H5P.AdvancedText 1.1","params":{"text":"

Example: Analysis is too shallow<\/span><\/strong><\/p>\n\n

Thesis:<\/strong> Black women are disadvantaged in Canadian society.<\/span><\/p>\n\n

Point 1:<\/strong> lower pay<\/span><\/p>\n\n

Point 2:<\/strong> police violence<\/span><\/p>\n\n